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With Each Passing Day

I\'ve been missing you more and more with each passing day never comprehending this, never thinking I could feel this way. When I am gone you\'re all I think about, I need to feel your touch. Seconds seem like years and I start missing you so much.
I might only be away a while but every second I am gone Feels like the kind of moment, that seems to last too long.
I thought that no one could ever feel like this,
but when I wake up everyday you\'re the only one I Miss All I\'m longing for is something to know that you are there.
I feel like anyway that I glance, any step

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Title lessEmotion and pain, wanting to say something but not know how to explain.

My love is strong but my heart is aching. Needing, waiting, trying to remember the sound of your voice but the thought alone is more than I can bear.

You are too far for me to reach, I always said that nothing could take us apart, but some things are too far beyond what I can change. Title less
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I Still BelieveI’ve never touched your hand,
Nor have I seen the tears for me run down your cheeks.
I never heard you tell the parables,
Nor knelt before you just to listen to your great wisdom,

But still I have faith, I still believe.
In a man to whom I have never seen, nor heard his voice,
But like the wind, I know that you are there.

I didn’t see you perform the miracles,
Nor was I there to witness the scars from the nails that were pounded into your hands,
But I still have faith, I still believe, in you. I Still Believe
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Love Beyond WordsIn a dream of dreams you were with me, the only woman I have so true. Oh, how I think of what Heaven must be like, it must be like kissing you. Your eyes burn with the flame of eternal beauty
and never shall they grow dim, radiating a warm
and sensuous glow that keeps me afloat when I cannot swim.
Your lips are roses in springtime bloom,
waiting for love on a melancholy day.
And when I wanted to pick those roses of red,
the feeling is beyond what any words could ever portray,
forever knowing that you’ll always be my side.
Understanding that this is not lust I see, Love Beyond Words
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Tender Rain Upon Her LipsWater lands upon an everlasting glow, Shining brighter than anything I’ve known. A tender graze, Across my slicked down lips, For in the haze, Is an eternal kiss.
Rain drips off of the tips of her eyelashes, Brighter than lightning, her emerald flashes. Forever engraved, This familiar site. Forever engraved, This unending light.
Never again shall rain bring me to sorrow, For this memory runs through tomorrow. A humid rain, With many more to come. A gentle day, And a heart which is forever in love. Tender Rain Upon Her Lips
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The Poet

Thu May 1, 2003, 1:23 PM

I'm a Poet upon the Ocean
Catching a wave on the sea of thoughts;
And riding them into shore.
Casting nets of words and verse;
Until there are no more.
Just trying to convey a story, with the flow of rhyme.
To make expressions, emotions, and ideas;
Come out in rhythm, beat and time.

I am the poet of emotions.
The creator of thoughts to rhyme.
I live out on this lonely ocean.
Existing all within my mind.

I am alone with my emotions.
Huge clouds of thoughts around me soar.
The magic hand of fate has chosen.
This pen of mine its lonely chore.
Now I fill a page with words
That I cannot acquire a way to converse.

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Current Residence: Lakeland, Florida
Interests: music, poety, art, literature
Favourite genre of music: Varies With Mode
Favourite poet or writer: Poe, Lewis
Favourite photographer: Myself
MP3 player of choice: Winamp
Favourite game: Kights Online
Favourite cartoon character: Snoopy
Personal Quote: Don't Just Exist...Live
Tools of the Trade: Pencil and a notebook

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~xcarebearx May 30, 2003, 5:52:46 AM

thank you SO much for that kind comment of yours. i highly appreciate the comments and stuff :) (Smile)

Keep in touch :D (Big Grin)

oh, and you have marvelous work here also :) (Smile)

~Caylee

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Look me in the heart
and unbreak broken,
it won't happen...

~juliev6 May 27, 2003, 3:05:13 AM

wow i love your journal entry! its great. I'll have to check out your other work sometime, since your Journal entry is so good. I got you off my sisters page (xcarebearx) so if she likes you, then you must be alright.

-Julie

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smile for me

~nightwhispers May 22, 2003, 3:54:13 AM

Thanks much for your comment =D (Big Grin)

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If I could put them in a jar
I know they wouldn't scar
I'd do it if I could
I hope you know I would

!starrlitsuicide May 5, 2003, 8:54:03 AM

hey hon

i poked around in your stuff......hope it didnt tickle ;-) (Wink)

i think you are a very promising poet, and a beautiful writter.
I hope you never lose touch with your skill, it can carry you far, if nothing else than to deliver you from your own solace of emotion.

$spyed Apr 10, 2003, 2:17:45 AM

Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

Fella

spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
Ninja

I know. That's why it's going to work.

Do not try and bend the spoon ...

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~kriek Dec 24, 2002, 11:05:13 AM

Merry Christmas!

Snowflake

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Keep the faith.
- Jon Kriek

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~xdisciplex Dec 10, 2002, 6:55:45 PM

Hey Andrew, thanks for the comment on my Jesus picture. It sure is beyong art. I like your stuff. Oh, and I saw Lewis was one of your favorite writers, awesome. I love C.S. Lewis. His books (His religous ones) are so encouraging. You got good poerty. I kinda write my own stuff. I don't have any on here though cuz I'm actually making a website for all my writing. Take it easy dude, have fun on DA, I'm trying to... God bless.